Author blogging and how to do it – or not

Agent turned writer Nathan Bransford speaks out against the whole author branding mania and says that there is no such thing as personal brand on the internet.

In a similar vein, J.A. Marlow tackles the myth of the author online presence and particularly the notion that writers should blog about something other than writing, because only writers are interested in writing and writers don’t buy books.

I’m not sure where the whole “Don’t blog about writing” mantra has come from, though John Locke’s book seems to be a significant source as well as his Why I love my Mom and some football coach post that he promotes as the ideal promotional blog post. Now I actually had to google the guy he mentions in the post to find out that he was a football coach, because John Locke doesn’t tell us. Apparently, he assumes that we already know or at least that the readers he wants to attract already know. Which means that I am obviously not part of his target audience.

You have to buy John Locke’s book to get his advice on author blogging. But Livia Blackburne sums up John Locke’s author blogging advice here.

The blogging advice offered by Justine Musk at Tribal Writer is similar in nature, though it concerns fewer references to obscure sport figures.

In a tongue in cheek post, Paul Jessup claims to have found the secret mathematical formula for creating a successful writing blog.

Meanwhile, Janice Hardy has another angle on the question whether writers should blog about writing, namely that blogging about writing can help writers improve their craft even if it doesn’t sell books.

At my main blog, I blog about writing, because I am passionate about writing. I also blog about books I read and TV shows I watch, I blog about ongoing genre discussions, I blog about teaching, I blog about German politics, I blog about the deaths of obscure celebrities who meant something to me. And yes, I am fully aware that some of these topics interest very few people apart from me. Would blogging about American football coaches gain me more readers for my blog and my books? Probably. But since I don’t give the slightest damn about American football coaches, any attempt to blog about that subject would likely come across as fake to the people who actually do care. What is more, my blog, including the offbeat topics, reflects who I am.

Besides, readers are always free to skip posts that don’t interest them. That’s one of the beauties of blogging. I follow the blogs of several writers and all of them write posts about things that don’t interest me at all, e.g. certain sports, dieting and weight loss regimes, frequent political ranting on subjects mainly of interest to Americans, the fact that their dogs are cute, etc… If a post like that comes up, I skip it. If the ratio of stuff I care about versus stuff I don’t give a damn about shifts too far towards stuff I don’t give a damn about, I may stop following that particular blogger.

Besides, having a blog post go viral via a link from a popular blog or just a strange case of serendipity does not influence sales at all in my experience. I’ve had a few posts that went viral, including the accidental Strunk and White fanfiction traffic spike, one of my posts on the wave of academic plagiarism allegations against German politicians that was picked up by VroniPlag, the hub of the German anti-plagiarism movement, or my post on the challenges facing international writers that was picked up by a couple of high-profile (in my corner of the internet) blogs. Most recently this post on culture and diversity was linked from a popular blog. And while these posts and the resulting traffic spikes may well have gained me new readers, they did not translate into increased sales.

I also have a couple of slow but steady burners such as this post (a personal favourite) on A Clockwork Orange and its surprising similarities to the British TV show Misfits, which got very few hits when it was new but has been steadily collecting hits ever since. Have any of these hits translated into sales? I don’t really know. And neither does anybody else.

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Of Art and Money

Dean Wesley Smith dismantles the “Write whatever is the hot and trendy thing” myth with his usual panache.

I don’t always agree with Dean Wesley Smith, but I found this post very common sense really. Don’t worry about trends, write what you want to write and make it as good as possible. It’s all very simple and straightforward really.

Hence, I was surprised to see that this post caused a bit of an uproar on the Kindleboards, a forum for Kindle owners with a very active subforum for authors. Part of the uproar was that people objected to the term “circle-jerk” used to describe the writer section on the Kindleboards. The objection was probably due to the sexual implications of the term, though considering how many erotica writers there seem to be on the Kindleboards one might think they could take it.

But a lot of people also seemed to object strongly to the content:

  • “Bah, he has the luxury to write what he wants, cause he’s established” – I’m pretty sure that is one of Dean’s myths, though I don’t have the time to look through them all right now.
  • “But publishers also look at what’s selling, so why shouldn’t we?” – And how many writers, including many going the indie route now, were rejected by those selfsame publishers with “X doesn’t sell”, only to go on to sell a lot of copies of that unsellable book, once they went indie?
  • “But I can’t waste time on a book that doesn’t sell. I have a family and I have to put food on the table.” – If you really just want to make money, surely there are easy and quicker ways of doing that then writing.
  • “My partner will hate me, if I spent time writing a book that doesn’t even sell rather than spending the time with him and our children.” – If your partner supports you and your passions so little, maybe it’s time to rethink your relationship.
  • “You just hate erotica writers” – Well, I can’t speak for others, but I don’t hate writers of any genre. I definitely don’t hate erotica, considering that I used to write it (well, sort of).
  • “Anyone who doesn’t chase trends is just one of those artist types and possibly gay and communist besides.” – You say that as if that were a bad thing.

Okay, so the gay and communist remarks were my own additions, but the implication was surely there. Besides, I am getting very weary of this whole art versus entertainment and never the two shall meet dichotomy. Hang out in online genre fiction communities (it doesn’t matter what genre) and you’ll quickly see people complaining how all literary fiction is depressing and small-minded and only concerns itself with small problems. You’ll also see plenty of sneering at “artistes” and “special snowflakes”* and “literati” and “elites”, coupled with snarky remarks about how they, meaning some other writer deemed more literary, may have won the award, but I am the one who’s selling.

Here are two examples, both reports of the Reno Worldcon by two writers unhappy with the Hugo and Campbell award winners, which illustrate some of the attitudes mentioned above. No offense to the gentlemen in question, whose work I haven’t read (though the monster hunter books sounds fun). These were mainly the most recent examples that came to mind. There are plenty of others.

In many ways, I even understand the “Let’s get back at the literary establishment” attitude, considering how the literary establishment traditionally has treated and often continues to treat genre writers. They rarely distinguish between pulpy genre fiction and literary genre fiction either. For example, Lev Grossman, the winner of the Campbell award for best new writer, who is mentioned as one of those literary genre writers in the two posts above, got a terribly condescending “But fantasy is for kids” review in the New York Times for The Magicians, the novel that would win him the Campbell.

But why do art and entertainment have to be an either-or choice? Why can’t we have both?

I’m not a literary snob by any means. Hell, I called my publishing house “Pegasus Pulp” after all. But I also aim to make everything I write as good as it can be. And sometimes I even – gasp – get literary. One of the stories offered for sale here is written in a first person, present tense POV, i.e. a style that is considered hopelessly non-commercial. Another story has dueling first person narrators.

Why did I write them that way, when a traditional third person limited POV would probably have been more commercial? Simple, because I wanted to. In fact, that is the reason why I write any sort of fiction. Because I want to.

For me, one of the greatest things about indie publishing is the sense of freedom, the knowledge that I can write and publish whatever I want to. I don’t have to worry about conventional wisdom regarding what does and doesn’t sell. Nor do I have to worry about genre pigeonholing. Because – in case you hadn’t noticed – I write all over the genre map. And one of my greatest worries regarding traditional publishing and indeed what kept me from submitting Colfrith more aggressively was the fear that I would be forced to write one genre and one kind of book only for the rest of my life.

And I am not that writer. Republishing my old short stories has forced me to reread my backlist again, sometimes for the first time in years. And while I still like those stories (otherwise I wouldn’t republish them) and while I had a blast writing them, they are very different from what I write now.

I have nothing but respect for commercially successful indie writers who have found their niche. And it’s great that John Locke’s focus-group driven publishing policy works so well for him. But I can’t do that sort of thing, because I’m not that kind of writer. And I strongly suspect that all the focus-group analysis and targeted marketing in the world wouldn’t make John Locke sell as well as he does, if he hadn’t put all his passion into his novels and genuinely enjoyed writing them.

So regardless of what worked for John Locke and Amanda Hocking and J.A. Konrath and any other successful indie writer you could name, I still find it sad to see indie writers giving up so easily on the freedoms the indie model gives them. I suspect that those ultra-commercial indie authors – not Locke or Hocking or Konrath but their dozens of copycats – are what turns people like Paul Jessup off from the indie model. And I partly agree with him, because this whole “Does X sell, does Y sell, does it help if I sacrifice a goat to the publishing gods on the night of the full moon?” attitude is going on my nerves as well.

Would I sell better if I picked a hot genre and wrote just one sort of book all the time? Probably. But I also wouldn’t enjoy writing nearly as much. And while it would be nice to be able to live of my writing alone, I have a job (or two).

That’s not to say that I don’t have commercial considerations. While deciding what to publish next, I finally picked a novelette I hadn’t intended to publish for quite a while yet. Why? Because it is a pirate romance and September 19 is Talk Like a Pirate Day and it would make a nice tie-in, particularly coupled with Rites of Passage.

So yes, I am commercially minded. And I am an entertainer. But I also am an artist.

*What’s the problem with snowflakes anyway? Because I don’t get it why “snowflake” has suddenly become a synonym for arrogant artist type.

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August Sales Figures and El Carnicero

First of all, it’s time for the August sales figures. In August 2011 I sold 9 e-books across all platforms, down from 15 in July. The detailed breakdown is as follows:

Amazon US: 5
Amazon UK: 3
XinXii: 1

Those numbers aren’t great, but most indie writers have very low sales figures in the first few months. Mine are actually better than some of the others I have seen. Interestingly, I seem to be one of the very few indies who actually sell on XinXii. Besides, many self-published writers report a sales slump in August and Kindle Direct Publishing had some techical issues as well. So I’m not worried.

Besides, the best promotion and sales booster seems to be uploading new work and I’ve got that one covered. Because as I already hinted yesterday on my main blog, I have a new e-novelette to announce. This is the second of the spicy pulp stories I wrote for Man’s Story to become digitally available again. As promised, it has a beautiful monochrome cover by Señor Goya himself. And now, without further ado I give you El Carnicero.

El Carnicero Captain Jonathan Farnsworth of the Rifle Brigade, fighting under Wellington in Peninsular Wars, only wanted to meet with some of allies and spend a few stolen hours with Comandante Teresa, rebel leader and the woman he loved. But instead Jonathan stepped into a scene of pure horror, when he found the village burning and its people slaughtered.
His beloved Teresa was not among the dead. But, as Jonathan learned from the sole survivor, she had been captured by the Napoleon’s troops. Now Teresa was the prisoner of the notorious French colonel known only as El Carnicero, the butcher. And she was sentenced to be garrotted as a rebel…

Warning: There is violence and some fairly graphic scenes in this novelette, so sensitive readers should tread carefully. But there’s also a happy ending – it is a romance, after all.

For more information, visit the dedicated El Carnicero page.
Buy it for the low price of 2.99 US-dollars or Euro and 1.99 pounds at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Amazon Germany, OmniLit/AllRomance e-books and XinXii.

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Now computers are writing fiction – is this the death of publishing?

Expect my August sales figures as well as a new story in the next few days. But for now, here is another linkdump. And sorry about the melodramatic headline, but if it gets me views and people who buy books, I’m not above melodrama.

Chuck Wendig offers 25 things you should know about self-publishing. Some great and measured advice there.

I’ve linked to the New York Times report about a gentleman in Singapore who has published 600000 books before. Now Philip Palmer, the man behind one million books (the New York Times got the figure wrong), speaks out at Passive Guy’s blog.

Apparently, the New York Times got more than just the number of books wrong, because it appears that Mr Palmer is not a spammer but runs a legitimate company compiling and repackaging information on niche subjects. It’s not a business model I can really identify with, but if it makes him money than great for him.

Mr Palmer is also working on a software program that automatically generates fiction based on lots of parameters and has already written one for poetry. There is a video demonstration here.

The first association that popped into my head was, “Wow. That’s just like the novel and song writing machines George Orwell mentioned in 1984.” Indeed, the novel and song writing machines generate cheap entertainment for the proles. The heroine, Julia, operates one of them. I always viewed those novel writing machines (they do porn, too) as a take on the plot wheel developed by British thriller author Edgar Wallace (I wrote an article about him several years ago) and similar plotting systems. If you’ve ever wondered why the same elements keep popping up in Wallace’s fiction again and again, this is why.

Meanwhile, Mr Palmer’s software program strikes me as a souped up and customisable version of story generators like They fight crime! or The Brainstormer, to list two of my favourites. I can imagine playing around with this for an afternoon and having a lot of fun, just like I sometimes use the generators to spark ideas. They fight crime! just gave me a great urban fantasy idea and I wasn’t even looking for one.

Do I feel threatened as a writer and occasional poet by the existence of such a program? No more than I feel threatened by automatic translation programs as a translator. Human language is incredibly complex and AIs are not nearly developed enough to grasp all its nuances. These programs, whether for translation or writing, have their purpose, but they cannot replace a human and they won’t anytime soon.

I also linked to the “publishing is dead and the sky is falling” article by Ewan Morrison from the Guardian in my last post. Now Passive Guy, Joe Konrath, Holly Lisle and Dave Freer offer their responses. Even the Guardian itself published a response by Lloyd Shepherd who believes that the death of books is greatly exaggerated.

On a related note, Nathan Bransford wonders whether self-published authors will need a publisher at all in the future, once they have hit it big. I suspect the answer will differ from author to author.

More end of publishing as we know it handwringing at the Wall Street Journal. And while they’re at it, the Wall Street Journal quickly declares American literature or rather the study of same dead as well.

I always find it stunning how entrenched the idea of an absolute canon of great books still is in the US, considering that Americans were the first to dismantle it more than forty years ago. Besides, I have serious problems taking someone seriously who believes that the best American novelists of the 20th century are Willa Cather and Theodore Dreiser. I grant him Willa Cather, though she’s not the first or even the seventh choice that comes to mind. But Theodore Dreiser? Seriously?

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Indie Publishing Link Round-up

Here is yet another “Wah – the book is dead and western culture is dying along with it” article, this time by one Ewan Morrison. The Guardian seems to have cornered the market in doom and gloom articles about the future of publishing, since there is a new one every week or so.

Joe Konrath believes that the print distribution deal John Locke made with Simon and Schuster is yet another sign of the apocalypse that will sweep publishing as we know it away. Unlike Mr. Doom and Gloom from the Guardian, however, Joe Konrath is positively gleeful about this.

Another hot topic at the moment seems to be authors and publishers selling e-books directly via their websites.Joe Konrath, Blake Crouch and David Gaughran all weigh in. This older post by Moriah Jovan of B10 mediaworx tackles the issue as well.

A webstore with a direct download option may be coming to Pegasus Pulp at some point in the future. After all, that’s one of the big advantages of having a separate site for the publishing company. However, a webstore requires a bit more research into logistics such as shopping cart systems or plugins, legal requirements for e-commerce sites in Germany, tax issues, etc… At the moment, this is more of a long-term strategy.

The New York Times profiles a man called Philip Parker from Singapore who is listed as the author of between 200000 and 600000 “books” consisting mainly of computer-compiled information. Found via Passive Guy. At the moment, this guy mainly seems to focus on compilations of medical information scraped from various websites or projected sales data for some obscure product or other. He also does crossword puzzles and poetry and plans to do romance novels, because hey – it’s just bodyparts, isn’t it?

Maybe I’m being mean, but this guy disgusts me charging enormous prices for auto-compiled books of questionable quality. Along with private label rights e-books, spam e-books with low quality content culled from Wikipedia and content farms, it’s people like this who give indie publishing a bad name. Fiction writers are not affected at the moment, because private label rights and spam e-books don’t work as well with fiction, regardless of Philip Palmer’s plans for computer-generated romance novels. But legitimate indie non-fiction writers will have a hard time being noticed among all the spammers, particularly if they write about popular non-fiction subjects such as health, diet and personal finance.

Nancy Fulda presents five ways to support indie authors.

Chuck Wendig has a great post on social media for writers. Yes, I know that I should really join Twitter. Except that it’s so not my style of communication.

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At last: The Kiss of the Executioner’s Blade

Kindle Direct Publishing finally came through and The Kiss of the Executioner’s Blade is now also available at all three Amazons in addition to XinXii and AllRomance ebooks.

Kiss of the Executioner's Blade France in the year of the Lord 1516: Born a nobleman but long since reduced to the dishonourable profession of executioner, Geoffrey de Bressac is the most skilled headman in all of France. But when he is called to the town of Charentes to put a traitor and assassin to death, a shock awaits him. For the traitor and assassin Geoffrey is supposed to execute is a woman, beautiful and young Angeline de Golon.
Geoffrey has long since hardened his heart against the plight of the men and women he is forced to put to death. But Angeline manages to stir feelings in him that he thought dead. What is more, she insists that she is innocent of the crime of which she has been accused.
Geoffrey does not want to behead an innocent woman? But how can he save Angeline, when she is to die at sunrise?

For more information, visit the dedicated Kiss of the Executioner’s Blade page.
Buy it for the low price of 99 cents at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Amazon Germany,
OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks and XinXii.

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Kindle woes, more nomenclatura, the resurrection of the gothic and the usual gloom and doom

Kindle Direct Publishing has been experiencing hick-ups over the past few days, so you still have to wait for the official launch of the next Pegasus Pulp e-book. Alas, the story is already available at OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks and XinXii.

In the meantime, here are some links: Continue reading

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German TV almost discovers indie publishing

Visiting the web presence of Kulturzeit, a daily 40 minute TV program on culture and arts topics, I spotted the following headline: “Amazon joins ranks of book publishers.”

“Huh”, I thought, “has Kulturzeit discovered indie publishing? This is gonna be interesting.”

Alas, it turned out that the actual news item is just the announcement that Amazon’s publishing arm has signed up Tim Ferriss of 4-hour self-help fame for a seven figure advance. Here is the respective article from the Guardian, which has the advance that it’s a) in English and b) a lot more accurate than the Kulturzeit report.

Because there is one big and one smaller mistake in the Kulturzeit report. First of all, Kulturzeit claims that this is Amazon’s first venture into publishing, when there have been reports about authors signing with Amazon (e.g. Connie Brockway, Barry Eisler and even J.A. Konrath) every other week or so. The tradtional media, quick as always.

What is more, they also mistranslate the title of Tim Ferriss’ new book The 4-Hour Chef, because the English word “chef” does not translate into German as “Chef” (which means “boss” in German) but as “Koch” (cook) or “Küchenchef”. It’s a common mistake, an example of what we language teachers call “false friends”, a word in one language sounds like a word in another language that has a different meaning. But there really is no excuse for a highbrow cultural program to make such a mistake, considering I’m doing my best to keep my 7th and 8th graders from making mistakes like that.

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Pegasus Pulp e-books now available at OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks

We have added another sales venue, for as the headline indicates, Pegasus Pulp e-books are now available at OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks.

If EPUB or MOBI format don’t work for you and you need one of the more exotic e-book formats, OmniLit/AllRomance is probably your best bet, because all Pegasus Pulp e-books are also available for the Rocketbook, Microsoft Reader and Palm Digital Pilot there in addition to the more common formats. OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks is also an alternative for all those readers affected by the two dollar Amazon surcharge.

Here is the OmniLit/AllRomance ebooks listing for all Pegasus Pulp titles.

And here are the individual listings, including excerpts:

Countdown to Death
Outlaw Love
Rites of Passage
The Other Side of the Curtain
Shape No. 8

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Nomenclatura, sales and non-fiction e-books

Paul Jessup really doesn’t like the term “indie publishing”.

I’m not overly happy with the term “indie publishing” myself, but that seems to be the term that has become established. Nor do I really understand the strong objections to the term, but then I’ve never had a strong attachment to the so-called “indie-ethos”. Besides, automatically equaling “indie” with “edgy” and “experimental” is a something of a fallacy. Like I said before, Uwe Boll is an indie filmmaker, even if his work is anything but edgy and experimental.

What is more, I think it’s a mistake to look just at the handful of indie writer superstars (or rather supersellers) and think that it’s all just derivative and ultra-commercial work. Because I also view indie publishing as a chance for those unusual voices and works that wouldn’t normally find a home. Besides, even the various venues for experimental fiction are usually open only to a specific kind of weird and experimental fiction. If your work falls outside that narrow definition of experimental and weird, then good luck.

However, I don’t like the term “legacy publishing” at all. For that matter, I hate the term “legacy system” as well, because it is so damned condescending. Besides, “legacy” used to be considered something good, until the tech heads who cannot imagine not upgrading a software or gadget that still works fine decided to redefine it. Like I told a translation client today, you cannot just change the definition of words because you feel like it. And for that matter, why is it always the technophiles, whether engineers or computer geeks, who think they can redefine words words according to their whims? This even applies to the digital self-publishing movement appropriating the term “indie” which has different connotations and a strong emotional connection for many people.

Yeah, it was an ugly argument. But then I’m very sick of people who think that just because they have an engineering degree they can tell me how to do my job. Never mind that the same sort of person often looks down on my degree and qualifications.

On to other matters, one of the things I really like about indie publishing or whatever you want to call it is how many writers are open about their sales figures, even if they don’t sell at the level of the big indie superstars.

Here, Annie Bellet looks back on one year of indie publishing. Her sales figures pretty much confirm what I’ve heard from other people regarding indie publishing. You have to be patient and put up more work and wait for sales to grow over time.

In fact, Kristine Kathryn Rusch says pretty much the same thing in the latest installment of her Business Rusch series.

Meanwhile, at the Atlantic, a journalist and non-fiction writer named Edward J. Epstein wonders whether e-books can pay off for a writer. The answer is yes, by the way.

Edward J. Epstein seems to have the right attitude. Be patient, get more work up, wait for sales to gradually grow.
What bothered me, however, is that Mr Epstein seems to have some very inflated ideas of what does and does not constitute success.

Take a look at this:

The numbers are not great — last weekend I sold only 165 e-books — but they grow, like compound interest, with each new title.

and this:

The result is I am now earning just under $400 a week.

Now 165 e-books sold in a single weekend (though he has fifteen books up altogether) and 400 US-dollars earned per week are great numbers. A lot of indie writers would be thrilled to sell that much in a month. Besides, Mr Epstein’s books are non-fiction, which generally does not sell as well as fiction, particular fiction in popular genres.

Talking of non-fiction e-books, according to the New York Times, Amazon is cracking down on scammers who put up dozens of e-books with duplicate, often low quality content. This is a very good thing IMO, because these private label rights people are making serious e-publishers look bad, particularly those writing about consumer and financial advice topics. This is basically the e-book equivalent of content farms and just as annoying.

If you look at the XinXii bestseller list, the top spots are usually occupied by templates for all sorts of contracts, business plans and the like. And those templates don’t sell for 2.99 Euros either, the prices are often closer to 9.99 or even 14.99. I don’t know how good those templates are by the way, because I haven’t looked at them.

The first time I looked at that list, I thought, “Shit, I can do that.” I translated dozens of contracts, agreements and letters of intent. I could slap together a template from those contracts (which are mostly based on templates anyway), clean up the language a little (since it’s usually awful and often error riddled) and make some money. Of course, the contracts I translate usually deal with buying boats or trucks or environmental protection equipment, not houses or cars, which are subjects more likely to interest people. Still, I could probably assemble a general template and sell it.

But I won’t do it, because a) I’m not a legal expert and b)I want to offer actual quality, whether I’m writing fiction or non-fiction. This is probably also why I never ended up writing for content farms – because I kept looking at the popular topics (health, personal finance, dieting, fitness advice, parenting, pet training) and thought, “But I can’t write about that. I’m not an expert.” Of course, many of the people who wrote those articles weren’t experts either – or content farms wouldn’t be so notorious for their low quality articles. But that’s just not the way I operate.

If I ever branch out into non-fiction e-books, I might do a writing advice book (yeah, because the world needs another one of those) or a collection of the articles I wrote for Thriller UK, which are now out of print and inaccessible. I might even do something with my teaching materials and worksheets, though that won’t work as a regular e-book, because they need to be printable. As for my academic works – I’d have to figure out how to format footnotes for e-books first.

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